How to Write a Compelling Story Long Before You Have Any Characters

What would a story be without any of its characters? A whole lot more than you think! Whether your manuscript takes place in the stars, an alternate universe, or right here on good ol' planet earth, your story is only as alive as the world it takes place in.

No matter who they are, characters need motivations. While these drives are often largely to do with other characters, they are inevitably tangled up in the environment and culture of the places they live. The social politics of your world determine everything about how its people interact with one another, what they're passionate about, and even their perspectives on right and wrong.

And so, following on from Writer's Connect Newsletter 78, we're going to look at how putting the cart before the horse can actually work to your advantage.

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Forming Ideas

When most of us have an idea for a story—that beautiful little kernel that bursts and expands outward into the rest of the work—it usually comes in the form of a character, a concept, or a sentiment we want to express.

Unfortunately, that means that it starts out with very little in the way of details. Everything else must be built around it, or otherwise contorted to fit with that initial nugget of inspiration.

Consider, then, if you already had a fully functional world in which to place that idea. Of course, if you set your story in a time and place in which you live, have lived, or are highly knowledgeable about, then this happens all by itself. Even if you take a little creative licence with that setting and make changes to some of the details, you're still working with a canvas that is almost complete.

If you're like me, however, and you write to get as far away from reality as possible, there are a lot of extra steps involved in arriving at that point.

Let's say your initial idea is a romance between an emotionally unstable but good-natured man and a comparatively grounded woman. You want this relationship to be the focal point of the story, and all else is a little bit secondary.

Your very next decision is likely around genre. Are they a modern suburban couple, or a wizard and a witch? A peasant and a duchess, or lovers across warring nations? Whichever it is you go with, there's still an awful lot to consider.

Continuing with this example, exactly what it is that troubles this man is going to be an integral part of the story arc. Trauma has a way of transcending genre, but the specifics are rooted in the individual's circumstances, which are—you guessed it—products of their environment.

Sure, the immediate cause of his troubles might've been that his father was awful to him, but why was he so awful? What were his father's expectations that he failed to meet, and/or what were the circumstances that turned his father into the terrible person that he was? All of these things have roots in the world around them, and the social dynamics at play within it.

Whether you're interested in worldbuilding or not, a certain degree of it is necessary to create a setting believable and engaging enough to house the story you want to tell. With that said, if you approach it intentionally rather than single-mindedly pursuing your central idea and treating all else as an afterthought, you'll end up with a much more well-rounded and memorable story.

Another Approach

As writers, we tend to have a preference for writing in a particular genre, so any ideas that we have will usually fall within it fairly automatically. This is something we can use to our advantage.

If you have a reasonable idea of the type of setting your story will take place in, you will already have a vague answer to some of these questions of societal hierarchy and culture ... but there is still the arduous work of fleshing out these backgrounds and assigning characters to each of them.

When you come up with a character first and then jerry-rig one of these backgrounds for them in the moment, you run the risk of that background existing solely for the benefit of that one character. At worst, this can make their entire personality feel shallow, and their background like exactly what it is—a contrivance for the sake of convenience, rather than something integral to who they are.

If you were to instead formulate the background first, that character would then be able to emerge naturally from within it, and the world in which you write would gain depth, complexity, and opportunity.

For example, imagine a secluded tribe of people who lived in an inhospitable forest. Totally independent from the outside world, the wildlife there are large and dangerous, and their primary concern is survival.

Immediately, you have a foundation for any number of characters who could spring forth from that tribe. You could have an introspective ranger who left in search of a greater purpose, a battle-hardened warrior who was exiled for speaking out against their elders, a boisterous young woman who came of age and left seeking adventure, or a frail youth who was left to die, surviving against all the odds.

Not only do you now have a thoughtful and considered character, but you also have a location that they could one day return to with others in order to put their past to rest!

Many of the best authors I've read take this approach to storytelling, and I recommend at least giving it a try, even if it sounds strange or counterintuitive. I especially recommend it to those of you who feel stuck when it comes to new ideas, as it could well be the missing piece in your process.

You are where you come from ...

... at least, for the most part, and your characters are too! Don't let your world be an afterthought—it's just as important as the people living in it.

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Word of the Day

mystique (n.)
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When something (or someone) has mystique, it has a certain air of quality, intrigue, or significance. It evokes a sense of mystery and reverence in others, and attracts all who come into contact with it.

The old pocket watch had great mystique, attracting thousands of dollars at auction.

Quotidian Quote

“To produce a mighty book, you must choose a mighty theme.”
~ Herman Melville

Get Competitive!

A selection of current writing competitions YOU can enter!

Rhina Espaillat Poetry Award

Format: Poetry
Theme: Grace in every day
Word Count: max. 50 lines
Entry Fee: $5
Prize: $2,000 plus publication
Closes: 30/03/2023

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Rhina Espaillat Poetry Award - How To Write A Compelling Story Long Before You Have Any Characters

Creative Writing Ink Poetry Prize 2023

Format: Poetry
Theme: Open
Word Count: max. 42 lines
Entry Fee: €6
Prize: €1,000
Closes: 31/03/2023

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Creative Ink Poetry Prize 2023

Writefluence Singles Season V

Format: Short story
Theme: Open
Word Count: max. 3,500
Entry Fee: $15
Prize: Publication
Closes: 30/03/2023

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Writefluence Singles Season V

The Crazy Cats Easter Short Story Competition

Format: Short story
Theme: Open, but must include pastry/chocolate-themed insults or swear words(!)
Word Count: max. 2,500
Entry Fee: £7.50
Prize: £70
Closes: 31/03/2023

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The Crazy Cats Easter Short Story Competition

A NOTE ON WRITING COMPETITIONS

Look over the fine print to make sure that your submission qualifies and you're happy with the terms of engagement.

The Australian Society of Authors has a highly informative post on their website called 'What to look for in a writing competition's T&Cs' .
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